कट गया कुछ इस तरह से ज़िंदगानी का सफ़र,
साथ हम चलते रहे, पर फ़ासला बढ़ता गया।
अनकही कड़वाहटों के घूँट हम पीते रहे,
रह गए ख़ामोश तुम भी, और गिला बढ़ता गया।
जो कभी देखे थे हमने ख़्वाब, पूरे न हुए,
और उनके टूटने का सिलसिला बढ़ता गया
हाल अपना देखने को लोग तो आये मगर,
हमको तनहा छोड़ कर वो काफ़िला बढ़ता गया।
चंद लम्हों के लिए खुशियों ने मुंह मोड़ा था पर,
वो न लौटीं तो ग़मों का हौसला बढ़ता गया।
gud job
ReplyDeletewhen did u write dis?
Havent read dis b4
हाल अपना देखने को लोग तो आये मगर,
हमको तनहा छोड़ कर वो काफ़िला बढ़ता गया।
achha hai....
@Babulal: Thank u babulal :). I wrote this way back but did not share it with anyone till now...there might be more such poems coming...
ReplyDeleteamazingly thought provoking...
ReplyDelete@Sumeet: Thank you for the encouragement :)
ReplyDeleteHey Yashi...Now I know the reasons behind your rock solid philosophies....very well-written and in sync with the melodies of a lonely heart
ReplyDelete@Urwashi: Thank u dost :)
ReplyDeleteIt's been a thought or an excerption as well in my mind about the triumphs of a personage regarding "laddoo" in both the hands...but Yashi! you are a paradigm for this...as you enclosed a good voice synchronized with a great thoughtful intellect too...
ReplyDelete@Ramit: Well, it is always good to see comments from people you don't know...thanks a lot for posting! I think the thoughts mentioned in my post would hold true for any relationship that has a communication gap...
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ReplyDelete@Yashi... MayB in ur wrld...single meetng will b said as with unknown ppl...
ReplyDeletebut dont u think a partial nite strtng wid a dinner on terrace and ending with songiee...sleep...cn be sufficient for fillng a communication gap....
I was having a cursory look at ur blog but this one post compelled me to write a comment that's not a demoralizing one. संक्षेप में अगर कहूं तो परिष्कृत और परिपक्व रचना। उम्मीद करता हूं कि आगे भी ऐसी ही रचनाओं के लेखन का सिलसिला चलता ही रहेगा। I've read almost all posts written by Suyash; now, I must say writing is in the blood of u guys. Keep it up good work.
ReplyDelete@Alok ji: I have read some of your comments on Suyash's blog...aur padh ke bas yahi sochti thi, 'kya dhaansu hindi hai!' Glad to see your comment on my post...will surely try to keep up the writing...thanks a lot for the encouragement.
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